12-21-2004, 12:38 AM
Occhidiangela,Dec 20 2004, 05:37 PM Wrote:Doc, while your prose may not meet the William F. Buckley standard for lucidity, it reads like a conversation. If it came off as simple carelessness, or unapologetic sloppiness, you might catch more flak.
Consider also the "error rate" metric.
In a two sentence post, one would expect to find a low error rate, while with some of the long winded stuff you post, or the hurricaine-force-winded tripe I post, an error rate of a few in a thousand does not stand out.
FWIW
Occhi
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A sincere thank you then. Coming from you, that means something, because you are the sort of friend that will say the truth, even if it is unpleasant.
Have vastly improved my writing skills over the past few years. Mostly due to online communication.
All alone, or in twos,
The ones who really love you
Walk up and down outside the wall.
Some hand in hand
And some gathered together in bands.
The bleeding hearts and artists
Make their stand.
And when they've given you their all
Some stagger and fall, after all it's not easy
Banging your heart against some mad buggers wall.
"Isn't this where...."
The ones who really love you
Walk up and down outside the wall.
Some hand in hand
And some gathered together in bands.
The bleeding hearts and artists
Make their stand.
And when they've given you their all
Some stagger and fall, after all it's not easy
Banging your heart against some mad buggers wall.
"Isn't this where...."