12-27-2004, 06:57 AM
(This post was last modified: 12-27-2004, 06:57 AM by MongoJerry.)
Skandranon,Dec 26 2004, 01:30 PM Wrote:Yes, I'm aware. All I've done is basic proofreading work - RL prevented me from doing an all-up editing job on it, which I have significant experience in doing. What you're reading is essentially a stream-of-consciousness spew of every thought that went through my head while I was playing my mage. (Yes, I have quite the organized consciousness.) Serious editing is definitely in the works, and I think I can cut it down to size.
Perfect. That's all I ask. The guide has a feeling of "stream of consciousness" to it. All I'm asking for is another read through to tighten up sentences and paragraphs and to polish your excellent guide. As I mentioned, I would prefer that you do the editing yourself. However, I also recognize that being able to edit one's own work is a skill that many people don't have, so my suggestion of using Occhi's services was made with that in mind. If you can edit your own work (and it's hard to do that -- I grow attached to things I write, too), then that's the best thing to do.