05-21-2012, 02:42 PM
The story. The idea behind the story isn't innately bad, and Act I does a decent job of showing it. Act II starts showing cracks in the storytelling, and Act III just kills it off completely (especially the end). Act IV is Act IV - win the war, yo.
A blind squirrel that can't find its own nuts could see where this was going.
A blind squirrel that can't find its own nuts could see where this was going.
Trade yourself in for the perfect one. No one needs to know that you feel you've been ruined!