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04-20-2003, 12:25 PM
Arghh, glad you like it, but now that I look back its definitely not my best writing...
Obviously editing is needed, but it's certain words that are ticking me off, oh well, this can be fixed :) . I guess that's what I get for writing a story, after getting back from work, after midnight. I found myself at an extreme loss for good words last night and this hindered it most I think. I think the form is good however, and the intersperced battle sequences fit right in without taking up too much of the time. Besides how many times can I describe a diablo battle without summing it up like: click click click click click click *pick up treasure* click click click etc etc :P . Hopefully more feedback will help finalize it!

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