The Little MAGIC FIND Guide for Diablo II LOD 1.10

[Kevin]

Thanks for the pointers, "oder" and "infos" have been corrected. Can you please give me examples of "awkward phrases and some probably interchanged pairs of words"?

Well, I would rewrite the first paragraph you had something like this.

"Magic Find" (or short:  "MF") describes the dedicated search for game items with special magical properties using special equipment. This doesn't include valuable runes because they follow different, own game rules. As the power of all character classes playable in Diablo II "LoD" depends more or less on these magical game items, finding them plays an important role. Now, the game isn't only successfully playable with very good or the best equipment, but every bonus that can be achieved through the equipment can make the progress a lot easier.

"Magic Find" ("MF" for short) describes the dedicated search for items in the game with special magical properties through the use of special MF'ing equiptment. This doesn't include valuable runes because they follow different game rules. Since the power of all playable character classes in Diablo II "LoD" depends, more or less, on magical items, finding them plays an important role. While the game can be played without the best or even very good items every advantage that can be achived through equipment can make progess a lot easier.


That is just my take. There are few word pairs that I changed around, and some phrase ordering. What you wrote was completely understandable, it just flows a little awkwardly in places. If I had the time, I would go through and rework the whole thing to just make the flow a little better, but alas, I don't have the time for that. Pretty much any native English speaker should be able to do that for you though.