A nice monday in the world of saanctuary...

[Occhidiangela]

Glad to see you like to tell stories, I tell them now and again myself. :D We need more stories.

I would like to offer a few suggestions for making it easier on your readers, here and elsewhere.

1. Break up dialogue when the speaker changes.

"Good morning my friend" says Atma
"Hello Atma do you need some help in tavern?"
"Sure why not? You can sell some beer!"
"Sell beer? Do you have customers so early in the morning?"
"Of course that old Geglash is always drinking!"

2. Capitalize and use a touch of standard punctuation.

"Good morning my friend," says Atma.

Elzix not elzix.

Izual's soul, not Izuals soul.

A bit more care in presentation makes for a far more enjoyable story.

I love your idea for role playing: Stand behind the bar and sell wine, rejuvination potions, for gold pieces. :D Wheeeeee! Hey, there is nothing like getting a second career ready for when the battle with evil is over!