06-27-2003, 04:21 PM
As I recall, the second line in a Haiku usually holds seven syllables. Not sure how the variations on that go, not being a Zen Haiku Master Shinto Philosopher.
As such, you might be able to tweak the first two Haiku, which still made me giggle. I know you were fried, but then again, we have edit buttons that let us do such things after the caffeine has struck! I, a true Edit Abuser, know these things!
(OBTW: you got a RL chortle out of me on Haiku Number Three! :) )
As such, you might be able to tweak the first two Haiku, which still made me giggle. I know you were fried, but then again, we have edit buttons that let us do such things after the caffeine has struck! I, a true Edit Abuser, know these things!
(OBTW: you got a RL chortle out of me on Haiku Number Three! :) )
Cry 'Havoc' and let slip the Men 'O War!
In War, the outcome is never final. --Carl von Clausewitz--
Igitur qui desiderat pacem, praeparet bellum
John 11:35 - consider why.
In Memory of Pete
In War, the outcome is never final. --Carl von Clausewitz--
Igitur qui desiderat pacem, praeparet bellum
John 11:35 - consider why.
In Memory of Pete