06-18-2003, 08:36 AM
I have never (may I emphasize the word never) picked on someone before because of their grammar, punctuation, or syntax, and since I am not an English major I feel inept for doing such, however after reading this post I actually felt perturbed because of your obvious lack of effort at proof-reading your post, regardless if English is not your primary language. I respond to you as follows:
âarseâ should be âassâ
âxferâ should be transfer
âiâ needs to be capitalized
âsortaâ should be âsort ofâ
Why is there no period at the end of your sentence?
Why capitalize "GO" in this statement? A capitalized GO represents the abbreviated version of go, such as when you point to a door and say, "GO!"
âthisâ needs to be capitalized
âatmaâsâ needs to be capitalized
What? This is a fragmented sentence with no coherence
Missing an important period after âtavernâ
âtheâ needs to be capitalized
âscamerâ should be âscammerâ
Various, important comas missing
Thereâs that âxfersâ word again
Huge run-on sentence
âwellâ needs to be capitalized
Various, important comas missing
âeverthingâ should be âeverythingâ
Coherence lacking
âstupidâ needs to be capitalized
Thereâs that âxferâ word again
Should be a period after âscamâ, not a coma
âiâ needs to be capitalized
Quote:Okay first off everyone who falls for this is a donkeys arse, because of the new act 2 xfer scam i found out that this is not really a scam but a sorta line of sight pickup bug of sorts
âarseâ should be âassâ
âxferâ should be transfer
âiâ needs to be capitalized
âsortaâ should be âsort ofâ
Why is there no period at the end of your sentence?
Quote:Here we GO......this all takes place in the tavern where atma's crying for revenge, your first act quest.
Why capitalize "GO" in this statement? A capitalized GO represents the abbreviated version of go, such as when you point to a door and say, "GO!"
âthisâ needs to be capitalized
âatmaâsâ needs to be capitalized
Quote:Well, walk in to the to the tavern this is where it will take place.....
What? This is a fragmented sentence with no coherence
Missing an important period after âtavernâ
Quote:the scamer then directs you over to the bar he will be on one side you will be on the otherside of the bar, he will ask you as sure sign of faith to lay something down of yours while he xfers to his other characters, now this is where the bug comes into play you see you can cast anything in the sewers with out having line of sight like hydra point and click, but you cant be around a corner and click it around the corner say about 1 yard around the corners to cast wont happen.
âtheâ needs to be capitalized
âscamerâ should be âscammerâ
Various, important comas missing
Thereâs that âxfersâ word again
Huge run-on sentence
Quote:well this is what happens in the tavern the bar block your line of clicking so you cant pick up your things and he can pick up everthing!
âwellâ needs to be capitalized
Various, important comas missing
âeverthingâ should be âeverythingâ
Coherence lacking
Quote:stupid xfer scam, really stupid i found this out by watching someone do this...
âstupidâ needs to be capitalized
Thereâs that âxferâ word again
Should be a period after âscamâ, not a coma
âiâ needs to be capitalized
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