A zookeeper takes on Baal
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Excellent read, Brista. I do SO enjoy writing with a sense of wit and timing.

Quote:I even tp-ed while chanting out loud "don't open a tp; don't open a tp"
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The lads were in a Time Out huddle behind me, presumably discussing fashion.
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Had I had time to dither I might have been a little less nonchalant about teleporting Conv LEs flying around the room...
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A summoned army is usually a sprawling affair and against Lister you need to be fussily tidy.

Even managed to build the suspense with me; not an easy task, that.

More than anything else, Brista, I enjoy the tales from someone that enjoys the GAME, the EXPERIENCE... very well done.

*tips helm*
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A zookeeper takes on Baal - by Brista - 05-15-2003, 09:12 AM
A zookeeper takes on Baal - by Occhidiangela - 05-15-2003, 05:57 PM
A zookeeper takes on Baal - by ShadowHM - 05-15-2003, 06:16 PM
A zookeeper takes on Baal - by Nicodemus Phaulkon - 05-15-2003, 09:44 PM
A zookeeper takes on Baal - by Brista - 05-16-2003, 03:13 AM
A zookeeper takes on Baal - by Walkiry - 05-16-2003, 09:42 AM

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