12-28-2004, 11:54 PM
Hi,
For someone who is "a hardliner on both language and content" a mid-sentence shift in person and tense seems rather gauche. And the content might be improved by not using 'excuse' and 'excuses' with differing meanings within a few words of each other.
Glass houses on the rocks, anyone? ;)
--Pete
Zingydex,Dec 27 2004, 08:58 PM Wrote:If English is your first language and you're not flunking it in school, there's no excuse for the hideous excuses for grammar that pervade some forums.[right][snapback]63688[/snapback][/right]
For someone who is "a hardliner on both language and content" a mid-sentence shift in person and tense seems rather gauche. And the content might be improved by not using 'excuse' and 'excuses' with differing meanings within a few words of each other.
Glass houses on the rocks, anyone? ;)
--Pete
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