03-25-2004, 09:05 PM
The scary thing for me was the imagery of the tight spaces - the description of tons of rock above and the rest of the earth below in a space you have to squeeze through. The suspense of the STORY and the frustration of the final link were very well crafted. However, as long as people are picking apart inconsistencies, there is one that really struck me - the sound. He hit his head and screamed but his partner could not hear it and yet the sounds associated with the boogie man were heard? Oops.
Lochnar[ITB]
Freshman Diablo
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"I reject your reality and substitute my own."
"You don't know how strong you can be until strong is the only option."
"Think deeply, speak gently, love much, laugh loudly, give freely, be kind."
"Talk, Laugh, Love."
Freshman Diablo
"I reject your reality and substitute my own."
"You don't know how strong you can be until strong is the only option."
"Think deeply, speak gently, love much, laugh loudly, give freely, be kind."
"Talk, Laugh, Love."