new xfer scam
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MEAT,Jun 18 2003, 08:27 AM Wrote:I have never (may I emphasize the word never) picked on someone before because of their grammar, punctuation, or syntax, and since I am not an English major I feel inept for doing such, however after reading this post I actually felt perturbed because of your obvious lack of effort at proof-reading your post, regardless if English is not your primary language.  I respond to you as follows:



“arse” should be “ass”
“xfer” should be transfer
“i” needs to be capitalized
“sorta” should be “sort of”
Why is there no period at the end of your sentence?



Why capitalize "GO" in this statement?  A capitalized GO represents the abbreviated version of go, such as when you point to a door and say, "GO!"
“this” needs to be capitalized
“atma’s” needs to be capitalized



What?  This is a fragmented sentence with no coherence
Missing an important period after “tavern”



“the” needs to be capitalized
“scamer” should be “scammer”
Various, important comas missing
There’s that “xfers” word again
Huge run-on sentence



“well” needs to be capitalized
Various, important comas missing
“everthing” should be “everything”
Coherence lacking



“stupid” needs to be capitalized
There’s that “xfer” word again
Should be a period after “scam”, not a coma
“i” needs to be capitalized
<_< Publik skewls. What can you do?
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Messages In This Thread
new xfer scam - by Wiccan - 06-17-2003, 06:05 PM
new xfer scam - by Jugalator - 06-17-2003, 09:02 PM
new xfer scam - by Baajikiil - 06-17-2003, 10:34 PM
new xfer scam - by Taem - 06-18-2003, 08:36 AM
new xfer scam - by Feryar - 06-18-2003, 09:05 AM
new xfer scam - by Ignatz - 06-18-2003, 09:17 AM
new xfer scam - by diegoforlan - 06-18-2003, 09:21 AM
new xfer scam - by Army Eye - 06-18-2003, 09:23 AM
new xfer scam - by ShadowHM - 06-18-2003, 11:34 AM
new xfer scam - by Jugalator - 06-18-2003, 11:46 AM
new xfer scam - by Taem - 06-18-2003, 06:33 PM
new xfer scam - by Jugalator - 06-18-2003, 06:39 PM
new xfer scam - by Ignatz - 06-18-2003, 08:19 PM
new xfer scam - by yangman - 06-19-2003, 03:26 AM
new xfer scam - by dabea93 - 06-19-2003, 03:44 AM
new xfer scam - by Dyntheos - 06-19-2003, 04:10 AM
new xfer scam - by Wiccan - 06-19-2003, 04:35 PM
new xfer scam - by Taem - 06-20-2003, 03:56 AM
new xfer scam - by Occhidiangela - 06-20-2003, 06:23 PM
new xfer scam - by Logic_X - 06-21-2003, 12:30 AM
new xfer scam - by BobThePumpkin - 06-21-2003, 01:46 AM
new xfer scam - by Count Duckula - 06-21-2003, 04:36 AM
new xfer scam - by dabea93 - 06-21-2003, 05:30 AM
new xfer scam - by Feryar - 06-21-2003, 07:50 AM
new xfer scam - by Brista - 06-21-2003, 08:13 AM
new xfer scam - by Striker - 06-21-2003, 03:24 PM
new xfer scam - by Nicodemus Phaulkon - 06-21-2003, 04:46 PM
new xfer scam - by Nicodemus Phaulkon - 06-21-2003, 05:18 PM
new xfer scam - by Logic_X - 06-21-2003, 06:37 PM
new xfer scam - by Occhidiangela - 06-21-2003, 07:28 PM
new xfer scam - by Nicodemus Phaulkon - 06-21-2003, 09:03 PM
new xfer scam - by Ignatz - 06-21-2003, 09:35 PM
new xfer scam - by Ignatz - 06-21-2003, 09:43 PM
new xfer scam - by Brista - 06-22-2003, 03:18 AM
new xfer scam - by sojourn - 06-22-2003, 04:57 AM
new xfer scam - by Count Duckula - 06-22-2003, 05:26 AM
new xfer scam - by Dagni - 06-22-2003, 08:29 AM
new xfer scam - by Nicodemus Phaulkon - 06-22-2003, 04:48 PM
new xfer scam - by Tiffany_Scott - 06-22-2003, 06:37 PM

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